Lucky Seven!

The challenge: Post seven lines from an unpublished work of fiction.

The Golden Rules:

Go to page 7 or 77 in your current manuscript Go to line 7 Post on your blog or Facebook page the next 7 lines, or sentences, as they are – no cheating Tag 7 other authors to do the same.

Here are my lines from pg 77 of Embers on the Breeze;

The walls were of a similar smooth brown rock which stretched high over her head to a ceiling that Tom’s strange light did not reach. The earthen floor was bare but for a few dry rocks and strangely, footprints. What grasped her attention more than anything were the drifting microscopic silver particles. They glimmered in the way that dust might as it drifts across a sun lit window, before disappearing into the shadows.

This is definitely not what I expected”, James whispered, breaking the silence. His breath cast plumes of mist into the still air, which dissipated slowly.

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